Picture taken by Elijah Autry
This orange is the best!
It is better then the rest.
I like oranges round and sweet,
They're a great, tasty treat.
It might have a navel or seed.
Too yummy to be a weed.
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I am eight years old and the oldest in my family. My mom and I are creating this blog as a place to share my thoughts, ideas, activities and creative creations. Some entries I will dictate to her to type and some entries I will type myself. I hope you enjoy my blog and please send me comments about my posts!
Wow Eli, is this the first poem you've written? It makes me want to go get an orange to eat. When people identify with your words you connect with them, and that's the sign of work well done. Your photo made this even better. Good job! The next time Papa and I eat an orange here in Florida, we will think of you!
ReplyDeleteI can't wait to see what you write or create next. We will keep checking your blog.
Hugs, Mimi
Eli, I love you poem, it's really awesome and so is the picture! :)
ReplyDeleteSee you friday at Recess! Ashley